Hi, welcome to Metroid Fanon Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the Scar Fire page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- KyleH (Talk) 01:35, September 24, 2009


Do you or do you not accept my invitation? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:26, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

It's Johnny's and Junior's ship. I guess I need to clarify that. The Exterminator (talk contribs count logs) 18:50, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

On a random note I need to make a sig here. ANYWAY! I added my story so far to the page. You wouldn't believe how long that took. Maybe we should separate it into more pages. Or maybe we could add chronology to it. Oh, nobody go to the asteroids of SR388 anytime soon, my story is still progressing there. It takes place right after the last time anyone was there. Ok? Ok. I'm going to add a chapter now. WOOHOO. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 16:26, January 3, 2010 (UTC) Still gotta fix that...

Ok, let's see... NOW! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 16:36, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

DANGIT! Ex, I need your help again. This wiki is wierd... :'( I did it the same way I did it back on Wikitroid!

ANYWAY, Roy, Roy is not Ron. They can both have been in Typhus Squad though. I'll leave it to you to change the first two chapters. Ron is still on the asteroid, btw. You found a way off after beating Terror, ok? Ron tried to do it as well, but failed horribly, because you were the Elite Marine of the GF. Ron was only the Elite Engineer of the GF. Ron is trapped in a mountain, and you think he's dead along with the others. Ok? Ron is Not Roy. Roy=Dane, Ron=Green. Please listen to me; ROY IS NOT RON. Ok? Ok. I'm changing his rank Lieutenant, the last rank you can have on the Front line; before Officer duty. Anyway, edit Roy's story. Ron went crazy, and that is why I wrote that log like that. Ok? Ok. Please fix that. They're not the same people, as shown by the Characters section. So you smuggled a Zero Laser on the mission? Ok. The rest of us onlly had Lockjaw and the beam thing Sylux uses (I forget it now) except the latest version. That's why you escaped. Now please fix that. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 17:02, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, again, messed with the story. The GF did not come to our rescue; nobody had a chance to call for help. Our comms were jammed before we were attacked. You got to the engine of the asteroid (a whole bunch of ships that went missing strapped to the asteroid) and got out of there. Sounds cooler too. Now, I will read the rest and see what else contradicts my story. Shouldn't be much more. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 17:07, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I added the names of the members of Typhus Squad. Moving on to page Elite Armour, the armour they all wear. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 18:00, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Roy, TerrorDactyl is going to tell us his plans on Metroid Avenger. Go here. The Exterminator (talk contribs count logs) 21:27, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Royboy? Why haven't you posted your plans? What did you edit on Avenger? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:23, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

A bit of Roy's first log. Sorry guys, but Ma and Pop put restrictions on my Wikia editing. Specifically RC patrolling on Wikitroid. --RoyboyX 00:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

So you're saying you can't do Avenger anymore?! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:58, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

No! It just means that I won't be able to do much except in the afternoon. Screw them, I'll just buy myself a Mac and hide it in my room... --RoyboyX 01:00, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

So what did you just do to edit Avenger? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:04, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

What's RC patrolling btw? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:05, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Y'know how admins have to patrol edits? That. --RoyboyX 01:06, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, ok. Btw, here's how I think the new log should go. You were a GF Marine station on some random planet (We can use the other tree planets for this) and Terror comes along and attacks your Regiment. You beat him back and managae to escape, but the rest of your squad was killed by the time you brought the ship to save them. The last thing you saw was Terror bite the head off of your captain, and then turn its head to you and roar. You left the planet and made your own suit better. This made it look like a blue fusion suit. Then, fighting the Space Pirates on Eliefa, you were caught by Admiral Dane, and fled into the woods, hiding in the waterfall. Then Samus came along, and the events of 'Capture' happen. Then you use Bewildering Pain, except you don't think you're in a cave, but everything is white. You know your armor is removed, and you can't move very much. Dane walks in and looks at you, disappointed. You can't remember anything about Samus or The Exterminator. All you remember is getting hit in a fight, and you were dragged off which is when you passed out. Now, we have it all fixed up, right? :) Like it? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:13, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I love that. It's perfect. Also, is Roy part of Typhus Squad? --RoyboyX 01:16, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, I thought he would be at first but no. He would have been caught by Admiral Dane much earlier if so. He was a regular Marine. Typhus Squad was sent to hunt an unknown lifeform in the SR388 Asteroid Field, but you encountered it before on a debated named planet. Like the Exterminator, Terror tapped into Phazon found there, and became the current from. When you faced him, he was just like ridley, except black with purple tallons and transulcent dark red wing flaps. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:23, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops I have to go eat now. I'll be back in a couple minutes. Bye Roy. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:25, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did that answer your question? I'm back, btw. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:48, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes it did. Can you edit the logs? I'm currently doing something over at Wikitroid. --RoyboyX 01:50, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I would but I like how each of our characters has a different personality because they are all by different people. If I redid that than it would lose the feel of you, who Roy is based off of. It would be best if you did it as to preserve that feel that they ARE different people talking about this. Just edit it when you have the time, Fanon isn't as important as actual stuff. Nice job on the Five Bomb drop btw. I know alot about Super Metroid, so if you ever need any help. Just ask. My bro got SM when he was 3 or so, and I watched him play all the way through my childhood. When Prime came out, the same thing happened, except I played it too. He was always the one to beat games first because he hogged the games. Then I already knew the story when I played it. I finally surpassed him on Prime 3, because he wasn't interested. He just wanted to talk to his friends. What a loser. He's still in Olympus! LOL! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 01:56, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

lulz. Right now I'm making Unknown Name pages for that black dude, "very important" person, lava fish, chameleons and one other thing all from Other M. Also, I didn't make Five Bomb Drop. I just added the pic. --RoyboyX 01:58, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I know you didn't but that was like, right after Chozo added the page. Anyway, I think the Planet Name for first encounter with Terror should be somewhere deserty. Maybe like Muhr? Widlan? Desolus? Get back to me on that. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:00, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Btw, wonder where Ex is? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Y'mean where Roy encounters himn or Ron? Desolus is pretty good. Widlan sounds too Golden Sun-ish (weird comparison) And story Exterminator? Or real life Exterminator? (in the case of the former, he's on an asteroid called Z-SF761. In the case of the latter, I haven't seen him all day.) --RoyboyX 02:07, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Roy. Real-life Ex, he hasn't logged on today. You're a good friend. You're tied with Ex for nicest Admin, though that may be taken away now that you can't RC patrol. Well, I'll see ya tommorow Roy. Read the new chapters I added to Ron, and read Elite Armour and the pages linked to it. I'll make a new chapter tommorow. 9:16 and still got homework, gotta go! Bye! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:16, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Royboy, I have answered your call. Remember when you needed Original Beams and stuff? I made alot, linked to the Elite Armour page, that I will have Ron go get soon after he meets you two (He is going to be hostile at first than I have a special twist in mind... I need you two to be reunited and go to a planet far out of reach by the GF, where Ron is heading right now, as seen in my lastest Chapter, 'Departure.' I want it to be a beach like planet, with land corals and sandy beaches, and teeming with sealife, but no sentients. Maybe we can use Widlan for this? Please get back to me, after you edit the Roy logs. As for me, I await you and Ex to progress Samus and Roy's stories. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:04, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I guess you logged out due to regulations? Alright then... :( I have homework, gtg. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:50, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

No actually. I managed to dodge Ma's whining (for the most part). Working on fixing the logs up. --RoyboyX 00:54, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. So, did you see my previous post? I need a Beach World name and I need you to progress the story to Roy being saved and you guys running to a Beach Planet, where Ron is also running, with a full power Elite Armoursuit, where you two will fight until you explain to him why you destroyed the station. Then you two part ways, Roy and Samus pursuing the Exterminator while Ron pursues illegal weapons that he has gotten a trace on. All he while, there is a flashback to where Kanden's body exploded, but there was something that happened. He dropped one of his bombs before he died, and now he lives on within the bomb, floating in the upper atmosphere, barely alive, and seeking revenge on The Exterminator. :D I love twists! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:34, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

You know what? I love how you respond to messages... TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I had to look after Sprinter, my horse. Took a while, and then I had homework (I live in Oklahoma). Hmm... a beach planet reminds me of Cape Claw from Star Fox Adventures. Maybe Widlan for there. --RoyboyX 22:30, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oh I'm sorry Roy. We probably can't progress the story until the Weekend, Ex is bogged down with Wikitroid work. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:14, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Roy. Have you looked at the pages I made, linked to Elite Armour? Anyway, you can add to that list if you want. Just make something up and put 'er on. I don't mind. I was thinking of using those weapons (since Ron is an Elite Engineer of the entire GF) as the components of the good Murder Cannon. OOH! I HAVE A GOOD IDEA! The counter murder cannon should be a combination of all of Roy's beams, Ron's beams and Samus jumping into morphball and ejecting from the ball form, thus killing herself but infusing her Metroid with the beam, which when it hits The Exterminator, it leeches all of the life from it, thus giving the phazon no host, at which time, instead of exploding, shrinks with lots of steam and disappears forever. (But this will not be the end of our series! In fact this will be a long time away from now and a long time away from the ending. This will be the true beginning!) TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 22:36, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Good idea, but can we change that part about Samus jumping into the impact zone? I wouldn't like Samus to die. --RoyboyX 23:01, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

What did I say? It w Will NOT BE THE END and for Metroid Fanfics, you NEED Samus. Don't worry! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:10, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Where's Ex? --TerrorDactyl72.66.132.218 22:22, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

No idea. --RoyboyX 22:38, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yo, RoyboyX, can Noremac Tterrag help the Exterminator kill Samus plz? Noremac111

Nice job on the new Avenger chapters. That's just what I planned. You escaped. Now, what you wanted to do was run, to an uncharted planet, away from the GF. There, you randomly encounter another person. This planet is like a beachy Maridia (Sandy places everywhere, with corals growing on land, because every so often the oceans rise so high that they can reach about a mile above the ground. They range from 1 ft to 50 feet, in any color from pink, red, blue, green, and purple. In the encounter, you fight and end up in a stalemate; Ron's suit and natural ability matched that of Samus's suit. In the end, everyone has their guns pointed at eachother, when they stop. Ron shoots Roy and runs. Samus snipes Ron in the head with the imperialist and runs over to Roy. Ron gets back up while they aren't looking and says "What happened? Why are you shooting a GF Marine? What made you like this? Samus, the Hunter, shooting her friends? What happened?" Roy gets up and says "You don't know?" Themn they sit down and talk to eachother, explaining what's happened, and why they're running. Ron then says he promises to help, after he finishes some unfinished business. Also, Terror isn't corrupted yet. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job on the new Avenger chapters, once again. Again, just what I planned. Now, next should be you and samus leave Widlan and pursue some pirate ships nearby. Ron had other plans though. He tells you the only way he could stand a chance against the Exterminator was if he found the illegal scans for the Elite Armoursuit. And so he diligently pursues them. Oh, and I need some more planet names. One needs to be full of junk, one needs to be full of lava, one needs to be uninhabitable, one needs to be acid rainy, one needs to be a deserted city, and more to come. Each of these will carry one of the scans. --TerrorDactyl

I have an idea too. It involves this prophecy when Samus, Roy and Ron return to Widlan and they are mysteriously warped to a sacred temple, where they hear mysterious telepathic messages and find out about the Prophecy of the Dead War, where the evil avenger (the Exterminator) will arise again in 5000 years and attempt to destroy a half-woman, half-parasite (Samus). The intended way for Samus to kill Exterminator is like your idea, she jumps into an impact zone, sacrificing herself to destroy the Exterminator. She, along with a younger runaway and tech thief must collect each of the Affinity Weapons and combine them to form the Murder Cannon, which will destroy the evil avenger. BTW what is Ron's Affinity and Alt. Form? And can you also come up with them for Roy?

The junk planet: Jukul (jOO-KOOL) the lava planet: Pyrodia (PIE-ro-Dee-a) the uninhabitable planet: Pyrul (Same as Hyrule, the Zelda kingdom, but replace Hy with Py) the polluted planet: Plufe (Ploof) and the deserted city could be part of Jukul, Ila Ruins. --RoyboyX 00:15, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

What about a frigid planet? and what about a mountain planet? See Elite Armour for Ron's weapons. I need a strange planet for each of those illegal weapons. I really don't know about that ending you made though. Seems kinda sketchy. How about the Exterminator is "killed" like I said. The team meets up on Widlan, and says their goodbyes. Ron goes to another planet, now being a fugitive for his weapons and discovers ancient chozo writings, prophecizing the death of Samus Aran's descendants Lukas and Fereen. The exterminator, like you said comes back to destroy samus, to see that they are gone. Terror is now corrupted by phazon by the exterminator and is now his servant. Ron tries to warn Samus and Roy but finds that he is forever trapped within the temple. There, he discovers a time machine built by the chozo so many years ago and enters it. He ends up on Widlan when the trio first met. There he warns them of the danger and tells them that the Exterminator will not die if Terror does not die first. Then they pursue Terror where they find the future exterminator has already corrupted Terror (which is why he was corrupted with phazon already) and have to kill the Exterminator once and for all. Than Samus uses the same move they used befor eon the Exterminator, but it didn't work. Ron was defeated and Roy took a beating. Samus had to get them out of there, and so she did. And so finally, Samus goes to the locker, pissed off and gets all of her upgrades back. Then she goes to Aether getting those back. She puts on all of it and gets ready for the final battle with the Exterminator. In the final battle, the two Exterminators meet, and work together against Samus. Samus damages both terribly, and the merge. In the final moments, the Exterminator and Samus both fire their best beams at eachother (Samus is the Omega Beam, which is all of the Affinity Weapons, all of her trademark beams, Wide and Spazer Beam, Light, and Dark beams, Annihilator beams, and Hyper Beam) (Exterminator being the Murder Cannon) They are equal, and so, Samus Shinesparks into the Exterminator, knocking the Core X out of him. Then she fires at it, breaking the shell, and consumes it. Then she adds the Phzon Beam to the arsenal. The Exterminator dies, but then the phazon joins Terror and Terror becomes TerrorPrime. Ron and Roy shoot Terror with the same attack that killed the Exterminator the first tiem, but Samus, instead of firning into it, shinesparks into it, sacrificing herself to break the phazite plating that protected Terror. And so, Samus, the Exterminator, and Terror Die. with Ron and Roy to carry out her legacy. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 21:43, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

I like that, however I thought that when the Exterminator begins to fire the "deadly weapon" then Samus, Roy and Ron would have to combine the weapons and then fire it back. They do so and realize that it will only stun the Exterminator, so Samus takes off her Fusion Suit (leaving her in her Zero Suit), and tells Roy that when the Exterminator fires, Roy has to fire too. He refuses and starts crying, so Samus kisses him and tells him its for the best. Then, Ron receives a message from the Federation friends he works with saying that during the war on the Pirate Homeworld the Federation's flagship the Artemis is going to fire a piercing laser at the asteroid, and warns everyone to get off. While escaping, Roy finds his path blocked by a wall of Phazon, and some particles reform into Exterminator, who is now an unstable Phazon appariation, his X completely drained. Roy sticks his hand in the Phazon and his sui9t is supercharged by it. Those veins that appear on Samus' face in MP3 appear on him, and he feels his left eye blinding (it turns a brithgter blue) while the other one is fine. He then fires several blasts of Phazon at Exterminator until he finally bursts into particles. Maybe Roy's Affinity Weapon can be the Pierce, which cuts right through the toughest armor, and his Alt. Form is where he becomes something like the Morph Ball and then can lay Bombs. --RoyboyX 22:01, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ending Edit

I said that would happen in the middle. What I said happened after Exterminator is killed. He floats to SR388 to recharge his phazon supply and finds his secret operative Terror on his asteroid, preparing for launch the asteroid at a highly inhabited planet. Ex goes into Terror and recharges himself and comes back out. Then future Ex comes back in time and fights, ya know? It's like what I said. What you said is the middle. Samus did die in the middle, but that's as far as the story progresses. Samus dies fighting Exterminator twice. It's confusing, I know. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:23, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I already have something like the Pierce for Ron (the Faze Beam.) I told you read the Elite Armour page. And roy wears his own armour right? Than lets make something original. His alt form should be a ball that glows and seems to spin faster than it rolls. Gah, I need an animator. The lights are little dots in the orb, and it is dark blue. The lights are light blue, and move faster around than Roy rolls. Roy's weapon should be something powerful. How about he took his zero laser and arm cannon and put them together to build the Zero Cannon? It's like the Hyper Beam except can be thin and continuous or large rapid fire blasts like the Hyper Beam.

And I need a blizzard planet and a swamp planet, please. Think of some other strange environments. Maybe a graveyard planet? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:29, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe we could use Arcterra for the blizzard planet, and Solairon 12 for the swamp planet. The latter was mentioned in a screensaver on the Metroid website but nothing other than its mass can be seen. --RoyboyX 23:46, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well we could, but I want these to be original. They all appear in the Darch Star Cluster, where the Galactic Federation has hidden the Lost Weapons, listed on the Elite Armour page, if you read it. Think of some strange environments to be in the cluster. There's an abandoned space station there as well, just outside of it. --TerrorDactyl

Eliefa is supposed to be nearby Jigrad, so maybe we could have them all in the Darch Star Cluster. BTW do you like the Weavel log I made? --RoyboyX 21:56, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ack! I like what you wrote, but Ron hasn't gotten illegal weaponry yet! Did you see the new Ron chapter I wrote? He couldn't; he needed something else to do that. Redo that Exterminator log you made, please. Sorry. And Ron returned to Widlan before that, right? Right. They headed for Eliefa to stop Weavil and succeeded. After that, they returned to Widlan because of GF Troopers present on Eliefa. The Darch System, I was thinking was in a place way off to the side of the galaxy. Eliefa is deep in the core with the Galactic Federation, while the Pirates and Kriken are deep outside of the core. The Darch Cluster is deep in neutral space; nobody wants it. Eliefa is rich with minerals and metals that the Federation uses to make Jovian Steel, which is why the Exterminator so intently pursues it. Widlan is in the Neutral Space as well, so as to stay out of harms way when planning their next move. --TerrorDactyl

Actually, Jovian Steel comes from Jovia XII. --RoyboyX 00:07, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, okay. Umm, you went a bit too fast on the prophecy thing. Umm... That shouldn't happen yet. That should happen AFTER ex dies. Please get rid of it. And no, Ron doesn't use illegal weapons YET. YET. He needs some Fusion Suit scans first. Some he'll get soon enough. And they use Eliefa to train troops, I guess then. There, that's why they try and take Eliefa. They train marines there. --TerrorDactyl

I think that we could have a scene where Samus visits Jamoru and recruits Mauk and Kreatz. Jamoru went into war during the manga and so after that we could say Mauk and Kreatz had stayed to help. When they break into the asteroid, they could also free Armstrong Houston, Hardy, Keaton and Damara. Just a thought. Maybe not Hardy and Keaton but definately the other four. --RoyboyX 00:53, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

You know, I was thinking like they get an entire army going. I mean, who's going to holdthe Pirates off while all that happens? Who's going to hold the Exterminator while they fire? I think we should gather lots of people. I was thinking like they mass a huge prison break on Z-SF... umm whatever... and free Johnny and Junior, the slaves. Then all of those people attack the Pirates. Commandos come in and start killing all of them, however. Ron, using his new Gravity Suit does a huge somersault over the crowd and uses his boosters to accelerate himself, fist forward, straight into a commando, piercing his head. That sets off the commandos gun, so Ron grabs it and fires at the other pirates. He then throws the body and blows it up with an electron bomb. He hacks the auto defense with his Nano Mistles and uses it against the pirates. All the whil, Roy and Samus push forward in tandem, kicking ass. They end up back to back and they look at eachother nodding. They both go into morph ball after Samus shows off a new move, the Morph Grapple. She grabs Roy and they both go flying around the room like a pinball, tripping all of the pirates, all the while dropping bombs and killing them. In the end, Samus drops a power bomb and throws it in the air, grapples it, spins and pounds it in the ground with her fist. While that was happening, Roy runs over to the door but stops, just in time to avoid Mauk blasting the door open with his fists. The door goes flying across the room to another door right when it was opened, and hilariously kills everyone in that hallway, with a huge explosion at the end. Mauk and Roy look at eachother nervously, Mauk putting his finger on his chin like "Wow..." Kreatz rushes in and jumps, throwing his boomerangs at two commandos just coming in. Direct hits on their heads. They get all electrical and die, the boomerangs coming right back. All of the others rush in, firing guns and stuff at the oncoming Pirates. Ron jumps in, crouches, and sets all of his beams on. He fires off some Nano Mistles into the next hall, that ate all of the pirates within the hall. The bots then hack the door systems and opens them all. Pirates fall out of hatches randomly everywhere, some getting sucked through them to the outside. They close the hatches after that and leave only the doors that need to be opend open. Ron charges forward, only to be passed by Samus speed boosting by and Roy hanging on for dear life. Ron laughs and charges forward, Mauk right behind him. They turn a corner and find Samus and Roy captured by the Exterminator. Samus' suit was turned off, and Roy was stripped of his. Ron looks at the Exterminator and smiles. He turns on all of his beams (including the faze and dispator beams, which means it disintegrates and goes through them at the same time, all the while using the Shock Rifle to shock, the Hell cannon to melt, the pulse beam to pin to walls, and anything else that I can't remember to do more damage) and shoots the pirates holding Samus and Roy. They both get pinned to the wall and start disappearing, all the while, you see them burning, being shocked, and disintegrating, roaring in pain. When they disapate, you see the wall was having teh same fate. It stopped after it reached a 10 meter radius. Ron somersaults over to the Exterminator and starts brawling with him. Exterminator is stronger than him, but not too strong. They clench their hands together and start pushing. Ex pushes his head forward, and for the first time, you see the bottom of his helmet open and a blue tongue come out, trying to lick Ron. Ex becomes a monster and starts to overpower Ron. Samus reactivates her armour and shoots through the Exterminator's head. It reforms and he becomes himself again, only to seem to melt and reform behind Samus, grabbing her and thrusting her into the ground. That's as far as I've gotten so far on the end. GtG. --TerrorDactyl

Good idea. Maybe we can merge it with my idea. --RoyboyX 19:00, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Indeed. And I was thinking maybe Mauk can rush the Exterminator while Samus is down, giving Roy a diversion to get up and put his suit back on. --TerrorDactyl

New article Edit

Is it possible if I could put an article about Metroid machinimas (including mine) on Metroid FANON? I mean, this is a fanon wiki.

Sorry I had to ask you 'cos you're the one I know from Wikitroid. BTW good on you for working on Metroid: Avenger.

TantrumDog 10:50, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well... I guess you could. --RoyboyX 12:47, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Moving Forward Edit

Hey Roy. Please excuse me if I write like tHIS, MY CAPS LOCK IS BACKWARDS TODAY. Anyway, moving forward with our story, I think The Exterminator should send a fleet to Eliefa to try and find Samus. He tracks the virus to Widlan and starts bombarding the planet. Ron tells everyone to get in their ships and follow him. He takes them throughout the galaxy in random directions. He went from Widlan, to Zebes, to Norion, to Arcterra, and to Kriken. When Samus' virus wore off, he sent copies of the virus in missles throughout the galaxy, so when the Exterminator got to that spot, he would have to search each and every way, just to figure out that the virus wore off. On the way to the Darch Star Cluster, Ron outfitted Roy with a back scanner to interact with the scan machines. Ron was going to copy all the data so he had spares to distribute to the others. Once they got the scans (which will take more than a few chapters) they will return to Widlan to find the planet infected with phazon corruption. The water no longer flowed, the shy was purple, and the corals began to sprout Phazon growths. Ron became pissed and cried out in anger. He loved Widlan, as Roy loved Eliefa. He loaded his gun and put on all of his equipment. He pulled out a PED and strapped it on his back. He charged out of his ship and absorbed all the Phazon he could, a futile attempt to uninfect the planet. He loaded his gun with ammo and set himself to be ready to use Hypermode. Samus and Roy tried to stop Ron, but he was so mad that he slapped Samus with the side of his gun and kicked Roy. He began storming off while the other two sat on the ground, in shock. Ron shut the hatch to his ship as he walked up it and activated the repulserlifts manually as he stepped on the bottom hatch. The ship turned as he reached the controls and he warped to ZSF...something...

This should take about 15 chapters. I don't want the series to progress too quickly as it has been, i think we need to draw out the upcoming events. Terror, out. --TerrorDactyl

I like the idea, but let me point some things out. I think they should just look for Roy and find him battling some Pirates (remember the last Samus log condluded with Samus releazing that Roy wasn't in bed) forgive my improper grammar, similar to you I am having a laggy computer and it is making me make typos. Also, remember Zebes was destroyed in Super? Avenger is after Fusion. And the asteroid is Z-SF761.

And maybe we should have a bit called Samus' Birthday or something where she turns 30 (many say she's 29 or so in Fusion). --RoyboyX 21:36, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I like your idea better. Yes, I forgot Roy was captured. I need to think of a Ron log here soon... Hmmm.... What could I have him do? Ok, I've got it. Ron didn't go with Samus when she ran. Oh, they did go to Zebes. I'm not saying like landing, but going there. You know, they come out of warpspeed, turn a different way and then warp again? That's what I meant. When Samus' virus wore out, she waited for the fleet to come back and looked for Roy in the ships. Ron headed for the Darch Star Cluster, seeing as he now had the GS data. :) Thank you for your innovation. Oh, by going to Zebes, I meant like going to those coordinates, where nothing remains now except a- *GASP* I KNOW WHAT THE ASTEROID FIELD THAT SAMUS' SUPER SHIP CRASHED IN IS! IT'S ZEBES REMAINS! Or the asteroid belt around that other planet, which has no name... Lots of asteroids in the Zebes system, huh? Even above Tallon IV.

I guess you can make another Ron log, but I'd like to wait for the weekend so we can see what Exterminator thinks of our work. --RoyboyX 21:47, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I wouldn't count on him coming on this weekend. In fact, he didn't. I wonder what happened to him... --TerrorDactyl

Damn... Edit

Damn, nice job... So, any ideas for a sequel? I was thinking Ron go on to be a bounty hunter; after seeing how oblivious and incompetant the Galactic Federation was, and wants no part in being associated with them. Roy stays corrupted (although he doesn't know it) and heads back to the Galactic Federation to be Reinstated, but was turned away. Infuriated, the Phazon reactivates, and he becomes no longer himself, but Evil. Then only Ron can stop Roy. Roy fights alone. Ron fights alone. What a matchup! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 04:22, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He he nice... --RoyboyX 12:47, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

You know how Ron found the Medusa and took all of Samus' scans? I was thinking like his suit looked so much like hers at that point that when Ex was attacked, Ron looked like Samus on the Medusa. Then on Norion, heeding advice from the Metroids to free their brethren, Ron encounters Ex again and well, you know, the whole Ex and the Metroid Lab thing on Norion. -- TerrorDactyl

Sure. --RoyboyX 13:57, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I love the sequel. Maybe we could change the name though... Metroid Avenger 2: Revenger? lol, that makes a pun on Avenger. I think the Phazon corruption returns because the vaccine doesn't kill phazon, it only makes it sleep. Thus, with the vaccine keeping Roy alive, the Phazon survives. So Roy must die to end the entity that is Phazon. I like how Damara is a more important character too. 00:56, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

I concluded Metroid Avenger just now. It felt unfinished, with Terror still around. I felt it important to have him die, you know? I hope you like what I wrote. Thinking of what to do to start Ron logs in MA:2P... TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 22:45, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

I saw you put all of the logs in chronological order. Good. I'll finish that up right now. Oh, btw, why haven't you responded lately? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:16, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I have been brainstorming ideas for Avenger 2. I'm about to add a new Roy log. --RoyboyX 00:08, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, I just made the most Badass ron log EVAR! Read Return. I find it a good start to show he's a bounty hunter. BTW! He didn't have his armour on in the middle of a bar, of course. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:23, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ha ha that is pretty badass. BTW, what does Ron look like, and how old is he? --RoyboyX 00:28, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

He has brown hair, brown eyes, and has a black mustache. In that, he was wearing a brown cloak concealing a pistol. He tends to wear a tan shirt and greenish pants. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:50, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think I have another idea for a Ron article. Should I post or wait? Oh, I gotta wait. Bye. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 22:18, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I would say yes to Kim if I didn't know Chozo style suits were so... rare. I would accept her if we changed her from being a GF Police to being a bounty hunter, with her own sort of armour. Maybe she wears some sort of Pink Gf Marine Armour, but focuses on Melee attacks? I picture that sort of armour having 5 elbow spikes. Ooh, I have a cool idea. How about she have this retractable weapon that is actually implanted in her Arm called the... Crud, what's the bone on the outside side of the arm... Anyway, she can make it come out and use it like a SP Scythe. Her helmet let's her hair stick out the top in a ponytail, and she has a gold visor. On her right arm, she has an arm cannon that shoots lethal darts that make her opponent easier to finish off. And she has a beam saber magnetically sealed to her pauldron. I'll try and draw her in MS Paint, but I'll have you know. I have nothing to go on except this, so it may take awhile.

Maybe she met Samus at the Locker? Maybe she never knew Samus died? How 'bout that Roy? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 15:46, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I found some blurry Metroid Fusion Beta images for you to use, but I hope you know you can't use them for sprite ripping very well. It should give you ideas though. Problem is, I can't upload them. Go to the site DarkSamus89 told you to go to on your Wikitroid Talk. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 19:43, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I saw those. They don't have the dress and shoes, elevator or this other thing I forget, so we'll have to see what we can do about it.

Well, I could try and look up the trailer, and see what I get from that? Oh, roy, you see what I put for Kim above? I would accept her if she was just like that. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 21:12, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I saw it. We'll apply those changes to her, though I don't like the idea of her hair sticking out of her suit. To me it would look just plain stupid. --RoyboyX 21:51, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, after saying that I said: "Wow, that's dumb..." TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:24, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Photoshop help Edit

Yeah, sure thing. But, umm, are you sure that's all you want? Haha, I can do a whole lot more if you want, you just have to specify. Oh, and I use GIMP, hate PhotoShop... ;) Piratehunter{ADMIN} (TalkContribsLogs) 04:56, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Metroid Fusion Beta Edit

This just came to me: I think the Restricted Lab should be Sector 7. It should be a lot larger. Oh, and I had an alternative idea for Kraid; he is another boss of Sector 2 (TRO) besides the spider thing, the chozo ststue, and the jumping thing. And maybe a Crocomire be the boss of Sector 4 (PYR). I also had the idea that Wide and Spazer beams be in. Imagine this: Three huge slow moving circles with fast moving Spazer's going through it. It's like firing two shots in one! Everyone wins! lol. But, Plasma and Spazer would counter-act one another as well. So once you get Plasma, Spazer is useless. Maybe a Turn on/Turn off upgrade thing?

Oh, and when you finish this project, how about we make an Avenger 2D game. You can program games, right?

"Report back to HQ when you're done." "Any objections, LADY?" Bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha, Adam Malcovich just REJECTED you, Roy! BWAA HA HA HA HA HAAAAA HA HA HA HAAA! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 15:57, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think a Prime game would be even harder to do than a 2D game. Only cutscenes would be some chapters, where there is speech involved. We'd have this expansive universe too. Maybe there can be 4 storylines, each with a different ending. Samus ending, you sacrifice yourself. Roy ending you use your vengeance to finish the Exterminator. Ron ending, you kill Terror. Exterminator ending, you kill Samus, Roy, and Ron and rule the galaxy. I think we could do it pretty easily, If I figure out somebody to program it. I think we'll need the Metroid: Zero Fission editor to do it effectively. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 16:49, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well, maybe the ending where Ron kills Terror could be after the credits, you know, a bonus level? And for the credits music, I have a very good idea. It's a mix by Hauntershadow, it has the Phendrana Drifts ambience, Arcterra's second theme and MP1's beta theme. It makes really good credits music. [1]

And we will see what we can do about first person. If we can do anything, that is. :) --RoyboyX 16:58, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I can't watch YouTube, put the video on here and I can watch it. Roy, 3d is a much more complicated thing than 2d. Ever wonder why 2d came before 3d?That's why. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 17:17, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think Ima go play Runescape, wanna come with? xD my name's Norfair Fire... Not very creative, huh? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 17:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I don't play that, unfortunately. Here's the video. --RoyboyX 17:24, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Metroid Mix Legacy of Samus

Metroid Mix Legacy of Samus

Credits theme for MA

Wow, I like it. We need our own music for Eliefa, Widlan and all of the other planets we made too. Maybe we can remix some more songs for that... Norion and Crateria for Eliefa... Maridia and Wrecked Frigate Orpheon for Widlan... Frigate Orpheon and Wrecked Ship for Medusa... I guess I need to finalize the planets, to figure out more.

Re:Drawings Edit

Well, excuse me. I'm sorry I couldn't show you my awesome pictures that I have of things such as space pirates, more ships, the council building and the metroid talons.--DekutullaZM 16:18, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

GIMP (Roy Suit) Edit

Roy Dane Suit1

Hmm... What do you think of this? What I mean is, are the colors what you were looking for? Piratehunter{ADMIN} (TalkContribsLogs) 08:41, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Holy shit, that looks amazing... I wonder how my pic'll turn out... Or if he's started? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:31, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

It does, doesn't it? :) --RoyboyX 20:34, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey uh... You mind making a new Revenger chapter? I have writer's block, and I also need you to edit Kim so I can use her in the next Ron log.

I got writer's block too. I'll try and make one soon though. --RoyboyX 23:14, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

What do you want done with Kim? I could probably get something at least drafted if I knew where you were going. I like what I posted above, without the hair thing. Anything else you had in mind? I have an idea but I need kim finished. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:04, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, apply those changes to her, and go from there. --RoyboyX 01:32, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yessir. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 13:51, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I made a new Ron log. Gonna meet Kim at the port. Maybe I can fix that devious writer's block now that I have some ideas on where I'm goin' with this. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 21:57, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job on the new Ron log! Ima go through it and slangify Kim's speech. She talks a bit strangely. Like a hillbilly. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:07, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I'll incorporate that into what I have planned out. I have a great plan. Roy went back to Widlan, controlled by the Exterminator's remnaints to take out revenge for his own death on the people responsible; Ron. Those people were dear to Ron. Dearer than Dear can be. Ron and Irene expected to find Roy on Widlan, with the others. But they were gone, on Eliefa. Ron's going to find his brother alive, but heavily wounded and he's going to tell him that Roy did it. He then dies holding his brother's arm, blood rolling down his head even when they were speaking. Ron gets pissed and storms off to his ship, his brothers helmet in his arms. He gets to the controls of his ship and prepares for launch, but breaks down crying. He can't hurt Roy. He's corrupted. But he killed his brother. Ron gets depressed and goes to bed. Kim then takes the reins and heads to a distant planet called Mondrevas, a magma planet where her ship is headed; the ship was so fast, GF couldn't keep up with it. There, she tells her ship to land where she landed Ron's ship, to deliver the package; Grade-A Pure Jovian Steel, worked to perfection. It was to make Ron's ship better. While she was fixing that, Ron falls asleep and was so upset, his spirit leaves his body. Irene comes back in to find Ron in an unfixable coma, from which only he can return by merging with a Tallor-Tartarian. In the ritual, the two must fight to gain control over the body. Samus willingly lost her fight to Kim. She had her time. Ron easily defeated the host's spirit, but accidentally caused the body's appearance change to his. The host spirit was forced to leave the body because it didn't retain the body's composition nor control. He now can track spirits (Samus' or Kim's), so he goes to Mondrevas where Kim has finished the armor plating and is sitting crying next to Ron's now dead body. He turns her around and kisses her, realizing now how much he loved her.

They then go to Eliefa and then what you had set to happen happens, except they fight, Ron not firing any shots. Roy beats him and knocks him unconsiounce. He takes his clothes (like you said) and runs. His plan failed however, and he began to look like Sylux, except with barely different armor and blue everything. Growths seeped between the cracks. He grunts and keeps running, everywhere he steps, phazon growing. The Marines pass by while Kim tries to reawake Ron. Then I have no idea what happens.

So what do you think? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 22:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm..... Well? Any comment at all? Roy? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:25, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was spending the weekend with my Grandma for my birthday (17 now). I also had an idea for a scene where Kimk changes into Samus (Tallor-Tartarians can do this for about a half hour) and she has sex with Roy, because she wanted to before her death but never had the courage to ask. Of course, I thought you might object to this. I got the idea from this book I read on my Kindle which is about a guy my age who gets mad cow disease and learns he's going toi die. With the help of a video game dwarf, a garden gnome who's a greek god and a punk-rock angel, he sets out to find a cure. In that book there's a sex scene. --RoyboyX 23:33, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Terror? You asleep? Making that log but without the whole thing where Ron "dies". --RoyboyX 00:14, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

How about we save that to about the end... That was a bit odd... I'm going to delete that one until later. If that happens, then Samus' spirit is drained until the 30 minutes are up. At 30 minutes, she dies forever. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 16:22, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Na'vi Samus Edit

Na'vi Samus

Na'vi Samus

Took me a couple of hours but I finally feel like I've perfected it (to an extent anyway...). Say hello to Na'vi Samus! :) Piratehunter{ADMIN} (TalkContribsLogs) 04:58, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my god that's awesome! --RoyboyX 13:15, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

..... Definitely not what I had in mind... Looks cool, but. Have you ever seen a person next to a blackout curtained window? That tint of gray was what I was thinking. The hair color's perfect.

Ooooooh, that's not Kim. Nevermind then, xD. For a pic for her, I think we should do the Zero Suit Samus one when she's sitting at the bar and edit that one based on the Ron logs description. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:21, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but that can come after PH is finished with Armstrong Hpouston with a shaved head and face. --RoyboyX 02:23, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

He hasn't even STARTED mine for Ron. :( TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:53, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Theme of Ron Green Edit

I want his theme to be a remix of "Hunters" the MP2:E Multiplayer starter song and another song. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Dang, Haunter's good. I'm listening to "forgotten temple". TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Writer's Block Edit

Seems as if you have a bit of Writter's block on your hands. Well, I can fix that. I have a plan for Exterminator to return.

Ok, so here I go:

Roy starts being eviler and eviler, eventually randomly attacking villages, destroying them without question. Kim tries to stop him by forcing him into the spirit world with Ron and Kim to some sense into him. His spirit was tied up with phazon growths. As he was forced out, the Exterminator, who became the Phazon inside of him, takes over his body and starts marching forward to rule the world. He stops when he sees Ron and Kim though. He thinks Kim is Samus and Ron, he just knows. He takes aim.

Meanwhile, Ron and Kim untie Roy. They all go back into the real world, just in time for Ron and Kim to avoid Exterminator's attack. Roy's body has a siezure, in which Ex and Roy duke it out for control over the body. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:04, April 29, 2010 (UTC)


Guess who? :) TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:43, May 23, 2010 (UTC) btw, sorry about Wikitroid.

Thanks. Go vote on the new RfC we got going on. We have to crush ChozoBoy's party. And we will. --RoyboyX 00:47, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

== Truly, a plague has struck wikia and all things Metroid..... ==

......and its name is RoyboyXModerator guy 22:55, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

That warrants a report to Wikia. --RoyboyX 23:00, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

And a report to me as well would have been nice. Moderator guy blocked for one week, and please met me know if it happens again, here or on Wikitroid. --FastLizard4 (TalkContribs) 06:52, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Metroid FANON wiki? Edit

....this is a fanon wiki right?

Does that mean I could write my story about Samus the Walrus, and post that story here?

That'd be SO cool.

Wonderwalrus 20:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

== Hi! ==

Hi! I've seen how you are the most active user on the wiki. I just made a story and would like to know what you think! Anytime! Nexus11 00:03, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oh it's called Scraps of Paper by the way. Thanks! Nexus11 00:04, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Can you ban Moderator guy for me? Please? He's bothering me a lot. Nexus11 19:51, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not an admin, so I can't do that. But I did yell at him. Never believe anything he says. --RoyboyX 20:39, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. :) By the way, if you have a free minute can you tell me what you think of my story? Only if you have a minute of course. Thank you again. Nexus11 22:56, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Roy! I'm writing a fanon, a real one this time. I just wanted to ask you if you could give me any tips on it. If you might review what I have and critique me on in it, I would be in debt to you. If you can't or don't feel like it, please let me know so I can ask someone else (I just don't like the idea of spamming a similar message on other people's talk pages). Please let me know when you get this message! Nexus11 20:43, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hey man, I would really like you to review my current uncompleted fan-fic: A Day of Reckoning. If you can't or don't feel like it, that's fine. Just please let me know. All I want to do is get a critique so I can better myself in the world of metroid fanon and fanon in general. Thanks again! Nexus11 21:24, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Seriously, if you won't help me I'll find someone who will, just don't leave me in suspense. Either say that you will do it in the future or say that you won't. It's that simple. I just want someone to critique my work and if you're not that someone, I'll find somebody else. Nexus11 23:52, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm a bit busy, I'll look at it in a bit. --RoyboyX 00:09, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Seriously man, there's no rush. If you can't do it don't hesitate to tell me. I'll find someone else, seriously there is zero pressure on you to do it. Just give me the heads up. That's all I ask. Nexus11 00:40, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Listen, I'm sorry for bothering you. I can understand if you would rather not critique my fan-fic, but if you won't can you direct me to someone that might? If you can't do that either, can you at least tell me that you're not going to do it, so I can go ahead and look for someone else? Thank you, Nexus11 23:35, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

I read Scraps of Paper and I liked it. I have a number of pages to create on Wikitroid now that I'm unblocked. --RoyboyX 23:37, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'll stop bothering you now, seeing as you have page creating to get to. Nexus11 23:43, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I'm applying for admin rights here, if you've got the time, come on down and vote! Nexus11 16:53, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

== I'm sorry ==

I'm sorry for my behaviour. I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me. Klonker 21:36, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm back. Edit

Sup dude?

Whoops, forgots mi siggy.... TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 13:06, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wow dude...never knew you had so much imagination in Metroid Fanon owo Awesome RPD490 05:32, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean by voice actor? Edit

Voice actor?

Eh, if I could have him, I'd have Christopher Lee as the Exterminator... Lemme do some research on a Ron voice. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 21:44, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I wanted Merle Dandridge for Samus, Logan Lerman as Roy and Tim Curry as The Exterminator. I want Tim Curry because he can make a very seducing and dark voice that I want for Ex. --RoyboyX 21:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, do you have any ideas for Avenger creatures? I have some concepts, like the Jail Warden, a fusion of Griptian and Zebesian as a boss on Jukul, Mermals, a mermaid-like creature on Widlan and a semisentient volcano that gives daily lava baths to Pyrodia. --RoyboyX 21:51, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thumbs down to the Mermals, because the planet cannot sustain waterdwellwers nor landfarers due to the tides. Only corals can survive. The only inhabitants are many forms of corals. However, if you really want an inhabitant, why not think about some sort of flying/roosting/coral eating creature?

Also, I like the idea of the Jail Wardens.

Hmmm, semisentient sounds a bit too strong for a supervolcano capable of chowering the entire planet... Why not place a large amount of moons around the planet and use them as the supervolcano sources? Each one erupts many times. The gravity of the planet pulls the debris down to it sometimes, showering the planet in molten rock. The volcanoes ignite fires on the ground that help the Sovas reproduce. The Queen Sova should reside in a large, dormant, supervolcano capable of destroying each moon and leaving the entire planetary system a nebula. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:11, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Btw, why do we need voice actors? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:12, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

I thought I'd pitch Avenger to Retro and have them develop it as a third person game like MOM. It would star Merle Dandridge, Logan Lerman, whoever you want to be Ron, Timothy Patrick Miller, Samuel L. Jackson, Linda K. Morris, Dave Elvin and Tim Curry as The Exterminator. --RoyboyX 02:21, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I'm not sure how well this would fly as a game... We'd have to rewrite the entire story, basically. Plus, we could get shut down as easy as Nintendo finding out. They could sue us, and I don't have the finances to run a lawsuit of that magnitude. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:45, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

As I said like two years ago, I'm not scared of lawsuits. And it could fly great as a game, so long as I get a lot of gameplay rooms in, some more boss battles and new enemies. As for Widlan, perhaps there could be a bunch of underground caves that branch off the temple, where Samus fights Kraid and that's where the Mermals could fit in. Cause believe it or not I actually want to see a mermaid in Metroid.

Also, what would you think of Kim's natural hair being a brown pixie cut? I think it'd be cute. --RoyboyX 21:42, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm... I'm liking the fixes you're adding in...

It would ake sense if the Pirate Hive was some sort of alien structure; not from Widlan. Then, all bacteria would be slaughterd by the atmospheric compositions. After, it would make sense for Mermals to live in the now flooded ruins. Perhaps the aliens used their strange portals to teleport the strange structure to Widlan. There, the alien structure could've revitalized environmental conditions, allowing the possibility of alien lifeforms within the structure... But we'd need an intricate structure t that; one that is air tight, and was completely submerged with a small, punctured ole at the bottom, allowing for SOME water to flow in and out without damaging anything.

As for Kraid, I disagree.

The tunnels, I disagree with, because something kills off things that try to evolve into the ecosystem... Actually, come to think of it, that could provide a pupose for the Mermals... Nevermind! With the constant tides, the Mermals could always kill whatever developes on-planet.

As for boss battles... Hmm, I guess i really is time for me to get Ron's Darch Star Cluster adventures up... I'll put them in Metroid Avenger: Endeavors of Ron Green, seeing as they're only about Ron and they would take up too much space in the main series. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:13, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Btw, what's a pixie cut? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:15, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't really think there would be much of a Pirate stronghold on Widlan. Just Kraid somehow being there, and then burrowing up inside the temple. How could you disagree with Kraid returning and in 3-D?!?!?! I always imagined the Mermals being tiny and easy to kill with just one shot but that might be too puny. I could make them bigger. One other idea was for me to make the Ylla be a mermaid-like race but that would basically undo all the history we've made of them on Jukul. How about the surface of the planet has the low-tide where only corals can survive, and the underground caverns branch off from inside the temple, because they would have had to destroy a small part of the environment there to make it. For the boss battles, I'd love it if you could bring in some more classic bosses and model some of the planets after areas on Zebes, starting with Pyrodia based on Norfair. Don't worry about Maridia, because we have that with Widlan. Finally, a pixie cut is basically like above the nape of the neck. Near the end of this video (I apologize for it being Tangled but it's one of the funniest movies I've ever seen), you see Rapunzel with her hair cut, turned brown as a result of the loss of her healing power. I think maybe if Kim gives the Samus clone the original Samus' spirit to fully resurrect Samus (confusing, right? :P), then she looks a little less like Samus, starting with the hair. --RoyboyX 02:21, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well the whole point of Widlan is the ridiculously high tides, and the desertesque jungle it leaves behind. I could only see the mermals living in the underground caverns otherwise. Plus, nothing is ever fought out of the water top-side. It's a paradise, and that only. Btw, I thought that wierd structure was like a long lost pirate hive... Anyway, why not some sort of amphibious race... They would survive better... Course, then they'd still be there... The structure should've been populated by some sort of air-breathing race, and was once some sort of space vessel. It crash landed, causing everyone aboard to drown. Those who survived could've evolved into Mermals. And from that vessel sprouted corals, skipping the bacterial, protistal, fungal, and plantal stages straight to animalia, thus creating a disease-free paradise...

Yes, I was planning on Kim giving Samus' soul back to B, but in a long time... Anyway, down in the caves (which we need to name... How's Nereides sound to you? It means Mermaids in Latin. Anyway, down in the caves, they find an ancient, submerged, subterrainean City of the Mermals. There, they see the prophecy after killing a giant, King Mermal. They return to the surface to find that there is no longer a way out... Spikes protrude from the wall forward... The group vntures back downward to the city and encounter the King Mermal again, in a great rage. It lunes for them before a giant worm swallows it whole. The worm then hisses at the group, and slithers away. It returns with Draygon... But Draygon is now dead, his stomach busted wide open. His eyes have fallen out and the snake slithers in them, shooting fireballs out from Draygon's stomach and slithering in and out of the holes. After being hit several times, the snake slithers into Draygon's skull, where it proceeds to shock Draygon's nerves, jolting it back to life; in a sense. Draygon then proceeds to attack the trio. Samus and Roy are easily knocked aside with their weakened suits. However, Ron stands a good chance. He damages the snake through the eyes, stunning it. He then jumps in the stomach and shocks Draygon int an uncontrollable spaz attack. This snaps the snake's neck. This kills the snake. The Draygon then falls to the floor of the tunnels, where it stays... Again.

Realizing this, Samus drops a power bomb within the corpse. This obliterates it. On surface, they encouter a small group of Zebesian pirates, whom are tossed aside. A large transport landed on the planet, carrying several snakes and the corpse of Draygon, in hopes of resurrecting it here. The snake stole the corpse and headed into the water, searching instinctively for caves. The group killed it. The pirates wanted this panet for it's clean water; an ideal source of sustenance for Draygon. The group destroys them. The Exterminator learns this shortly before he is attacked in his base. The group then sets out to kill the remaining snakes, before hey see a struggle off shore; millions of Mermals engulfing and eating the snake; it's roars heard all around. Finally, the struggle ends and the swarm of mermals consumes the remains of the snake.

How do you like it? And for Crateria, I think their could be some sort of rainy planet called Aceti, meaning Planet Of Acid without Planet. Brinstar, we could fit in as dens forested parts of Eliefa... The wrecked ship being the GFS Medusa... Lessee, how about other games... The Metroid Hive could be the sova hive of Pyrodia... Annnd... Elysia could fit in as itself, Tallon as itself, Aether as itself. Norion as itself... I think that should cover everything. Anyway, so yeah. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 00:35, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

That seems... complicated, but I like it. The areas explored in Avenger are Eliefa (which I intended to be Brinstar), Z-SF761 (Tourian in a way), Widlan (Maridia), Pyrodia (Norfair), Tallon, Aether, Elysia, the Artemis... the Widlan temple is supposed to be what Samus thinks is a structure of a lost Pirate tribe, the Vong. How about we change the Medusa's name to Nostromo to make another reference to Alien, and make it a Wrecked Ship infested with Metroids (QUEEN METROID AS A BOSS PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Make it a combination of both its battles). Jukul is in a way the desert area, filled with toxic waste and basically looking like a junkyard, which is what it is, Urbia could be the cold area and we'll go with Aceti for Crateria, finally Cidia could be a nocturnal area if you'd like that. Darch Defense Outpost is basically VDO, right? --RoyboyX 00:49, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you don't want to stick Kraid on Widlan, then how about Aceti? --RoyboyX 00:55, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the Medusa was going to be full of Metroids, and they were going to be perfect copies of the Hatchling, thus they would follow one who looked like her. Hmm, Queen sounds good. I think I could incorporate both battles. Head lunges, releasing metroids, shockwaves. Sounds pretty hard though. Course, that's how it was in Other M. xD. However, I don't want the Medusa (now called Nostromo ;)) to be a 'wrecked' ship so to speak. I want it to be abandoned completely in the middle of the DSC.

And it's a yes to Kraid on Aceti.

On Urbia, we could place an alpha male/female form of that horned sidehopper bull thing from Other M (I don't know it's name so well, bear with me. It was from Sector 2.)

On Cidia, we could place the Nightmare and Shreak Shroom (the adult form of the Spore spawn, which fights with hundreds of tiny Spore Spawns, and spores, along with toxic darts from it's vulnerable shroom cap.)

On DDO we could put some sort of large robot.

On Jukul, we could put the Slavedriver, a large Jail Warden with acrobatic, fluent, strong, and fast attacks.

You can think of more if you need em. And you can tweak them if you want. Message back. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:36, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

I like tha pixie cut btw. Maybe later in the series, though. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:38, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

The Sidehopper you're looking for is Baristute. Piratehunter said that he would want something like the Ice Titan from Hercules but with more limbs, and I have a sketch I can upload. I was just thinking of having only a small Jail Warden be fought on Jukul... I was thinking that you meant the Shriek Shroom to be a mushroom that uses the Spore Spawns, but it's good to have that back in 3-D too. Nightmare yes. As for the Queen Metroid, I'd plan for there to be an egg chamber similar to that in Aliens, and the Queen is hatching them all through the tubes on her rear end, so Ron destroys most of the eggs and Metroids until the Queen throws him back. He damaged her reproductive organs so she can't make any more eggs. The already laid eggs are her lifeline. You must first eliminate the army of Metroids, including those in their later normal stages that come to help the Queen, and then she decides to settle the score on her own. At first, she reveals that she has some Metroids in her back a la MOM, and you kill those before you fight her classic style (although she also breathes fire in this phase). Sometimes she'll grow the crystals which you have to destroy before you can continue the classic style battle. Finally, she seems to be dead, but she swallows you up and you have to use a Power Bomb. --RoyboyX 13:26, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the Giant Baristute could be a miniboss? The battle would be in a labrynth of ice spires clawing at the sky in what looks like a spider web. The Big Baristute reveals itself from behind one of the larger spires and plows its way thrugh smaller spires closer to the ground. It charges at Ron relentlessly. It runs into a larger spire, gettin stuck with its large rack of horns. There, it struggles to get out. Ron can shoot the Baristute, but the shots will do nothing but annoy it. The rage experienced by the Baristute gives it the strength to pull itself out, leaving a large mark in the spire. The battle continues. It runs into the spires several times, weakening each one. Suddlenly, one of the spires loses balance and falls, destroying other spires, destroying others, creating a domino effect. The Giant Baristute was crushed. Enraged, many more Baristutes in a herd charge Ron. Ron tries to avoid them, but it's inevitable.

Then the ice titan emerging from the wall of a giant glacier far ahead, killing them all in a single sweep of its foot. It then crawls onto its legs and roars at Ron, who sets his sights on it with his rifle.

The battle ensues, the Titan crawling around like a spider up one of the spires and showering the area in ice balls, nearly crushing Ron. The ice balls hit the ice and explode into growth into giant ice spires. Quickly, there is no longer room to fight and Ron gets trapped between spires. The Titant then walks down towards him, readying a final ice spire, when the Giant Baristute topples an ice spire onto the titan. The Ice Titan hits the ground, stuck under a giant spire. It struggles up, but Ron jumps in with the Hell Pulse, blasting a giant hole in the Titan's head. But still, the titan gets up, forming another limb out of the large ice spike. It uses this as a sort of hammer. The Giant Baristute and Ron dodge it for a few shots, but then the Giant Baristute catches the impact with its antlers, sacrificing itself. The Titan can't pull it back, because the Giant is holding it. Ron jumps in for the kill and hell pulses the Titan's legs, toppeling it to the ground. Just before the Giant is crushed, however, Ron Pulses the giant spire out of the way of it. But then the Titan rises again, grabbing 4 ice spikes with its remaining limbs and extending itself. It then trys to stomp on them, shooting ice balls like that dinosaur tree thing from MOM. This exposes it's vulnerable ice core however. The Giant rams its antlers into the Titant's legs repeatedly, finally getting stuck and keeping the Titan still. Ron will then crawl up on the Giant and scale the Titan's leg,. There, he will repeatedly shoot the Ice Core until the Ice Titan collapses into a shower of snow. This snow melts, and from there ice aroundit melts, sinking into the ground. This jump starts the growth of plants whos seeds had been frozen in the ice. Trees grow, and snow falls in smaller quantity. The glaciers recede, and the planet returns to normal - a snowy forested world. The Giant Baristute disappears into the snow, where then many baristute calls can be heard. It saved its kind.

Yes, the Skreik Shroom throws spores out and spawns very small Spore Spawns during battle. Other large Spore Spawns are about the room. They live in a large cave. The Shreik Shroom, on the roof, uses the Spore Spawns to attack Ron, and its venom spikes shot from its death cap. I need to think a bit more asbout its battle, but tell me what you think. TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 23:27, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ron's getting quite the adventure here! :P I like it. I was thinking maybe we can stick normal Sidehoppers on Eliefa, Dessgeegas on Pyrodia, Baristutes on Aceti and introduce a new subspecies tentative name Castelliga. lol --RoyboyX 00:15, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

And maybe to make Wonderwalrus happy, a walrus-like enemy on Urbia called Frondana? (the alternate name for Whipvine) --RoyboyX 01:08, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you have the task of putting in filler for Roy and Samus while Ron's up to this.

And for the Frondana... Your wish is my command. How about some sort of blue walrus/snake/octopus thingy with two long, sharp pointed, adhesive tentacles it can use to stab/ensare enemies and pull them in to engulf and devour?

And (sorry I missed this, compy was being slow.) as for the Queen Metroid idea, I say YES! TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:25, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say that there should be no filler for Roy and Samus, just Ron, and you don't see our happy couple until he gets back to Widlan for the final item hunt, then the Z-SF761 invasion, and finally, the endgame. Then we need a much more epic story for Avenger 2. --RoyboyX 02:35, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. Plus, Ron is going to be more agile in the second story because 1) Better armor. and 2) Better physique. Let's just focus on catching up first though, eh? TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 02:44, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

You're getting Ron's personality wrong and you're leaving too many plotholes. I can't fix it today, but remember; Samus only has limited memory, she's sort of like a baby, and Ron's more "shoot first, talk later. Kim would've been the one to stop Ron from killing Roy and Ron wouldn't've given warning; just point and shoot and kill.TerrorDactyl (TalkContribs) 20:25, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's not good to leave your characters in my hands lol. Btw, I have an idea for the end. Samus will be pregnant and give birth in the sequel to a girl that they name Diana Virginia-Samus Aran, named after Diana, the Roman version of Artemis, the goddess of the hunt. Appropriate, no? --RoyboyX 21:39, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Well, first off, Diana doesn't sound as... Robust as Samus or Virginia... The last name would probably be Dane... And the Middle ame is such a Marie Sue.

Btw, you should work on the design of Roy. He's kindof a Marty Sue (try giving me some specs for Roy's suit. I can draw it up for you. Just tel me what you want. Plus, I'm going to change Ron's suit so it isn't too redundant. Ok?) --TerrorDactyl Meh, too lazy to sign in... 23:15, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

I've had an idea for the Shriek Shroom. What if it was set in a cave with an eerie reddish glow (for some reason I always picture the battle in a lava area, not saying we should put it on Pyrodia, most likely because I imagine the mini Spore Spawns as Puddle Spores) so I decided we could give it lights instead). Anyway, the battle is situated over water, and the Shriek Shroom will live up to its name, shriek, then summon four Spore Spawns to attack Samus. They attack like they do in SM, and when you shoot their inner cores, they only get stunned. One of them has a golden "eye" (the three red things in their core), and when that one is shot, it will flip over similar to a Puddle Spore/Dark Phlogus and let you climb onto the ledge that Shriek Shroom sits on in the middle. All the others retract and Ron can perform a strike on the shroom before it throws him off, and a volley of spores attacks him. You need to freeze over the spores and shatter them with guess what, the Ice Beam/Missile. And then repeat. I also have a good theme for it, a mashup of all the series' plant baddies. [2] --RoyboyX 01:56, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

== Hey Roy. == Just coming to you to tell you about a change that might be made. If you might read the discussion on the Samus Aran talk page, since it affects your fic directly. Thanks, Nexus11: Fate envelops us all... 16:55, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hey. Might as well throw all of your stuff on the Samus Aran page into a section of your own, cause I have a strong feeling that nobody is going to interject with an opposing comment by tomorrow. If you could kindly do that sometime soon I would be grateful. Nexus11: Fate envelops us all... {ADMIN} 01:46, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, thanks. I'm just gonna put up a heading and then we're done. Thanks again, Nexus11: Fate envelops us all... {ADMIN} 02:08, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I put your article's name in the "Community messages" box. Just asking for your permission to keep it there. Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} 05:12, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. --RoyboyX 13:08, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Who did the theme on wikitroid? I assume that person has more knowledge of theme designing then I. I would like to converse with them. Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} (Yell at me whenever you want.) 21:57, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I wasn't prying or looking for an insanely long chat. Just a question was all. Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} (Yell at me whenever you want.) 22:04, February 6, 2011 (UTC)


See heading for explanation for why I was gone. Crap, forgot to log in again... Anyway, I was thinking more spawns than that. I'll have to draw up a picture for you. I may be able to email it to you within the month. 21:13, February 2, 2011 (UTC) --TerrorDactyl

Also read my reworked Avenger 2 plot which still leaves in some of the plot points from the current version but makes the story less Resurrection.


Roy is now 19 and living in the Samus Aran Memorial Hospital on Eliefa, being treated for criminal insanity after his court hearing for trying to kill his uncle, and for resisting arrest. Adam had taken Roy under his wing and acted as his caretaker during his stay at the hospital. In the three years that had passed since the Z-SF761 incident, Roy had grown stronger after the death of Samus but much more violent.

Ron is now living a criminal life, having reunited with his friend Kim Irene, a Tallor-Tartarian girl. After an attempted assassination on her by an unknown person, she reveals to Ron that a tradition of her species is to collect the spirits of the dead and become one with them. This practice gives them the spirit’s strength, knowledge and will and their appearance somewhat changes as well. Kim found Samus’ spirit and merged with it, learning of her connection to Ron and deciding to help her. Samus is distraught when she learns that Roy is in a mental hospital and they try to free him.

Samus, as revealed in the ending of the last game, has been cloned for bioweapon use on one of the two other Bottle Ships, cousins of the location in MOM (see the Bottle Ship talk page on Wikitroid). She retains her memories but they are blurred. The scientists also resurrected something of sentimental value for Samus, the Baby. While beginning her life again she listens to a newscast about an allegation that Roy had committed suicide and seems to remember him but can’t remember the details.

Ron and his new organization, the Brigadiers, attack the hospital and free Roy, leaving for the Bottle Ship to investigate activity of more bioweapon creations, with Adam in hot pursuit. Kim reveals to Roy that she has Samus’ spirit, and so she temporarily lets the spirit gain control of her consciousness to alleviate Roy’s sorrow. However, much to his dismay, he cannot have any physical contact with her for fear of harming the spirit. The spirit is already very physically harmed with lots of injuries including a scar over the left eye, messy hair and a torn Zero Suit. After a Metroid specimen breaks out of its containment, Roy becomes puzzled. Ron then speculates it is a Metroid from the Darch Star Cluster, where he spared them. Roy then becomes enraged, demanding to know why he did not bring one back for use against The Exterminator, as it could have saved Samus’ life, and kills his brother Ricky.

Ron then suffers trauma and loses the will to live, and dies, before Kim manages to give him a part of her physical being to resurrect him as a Tallor-Tartarian. When he awakes, the two confess their love for one another, and Roy feels anger that he cannot share the feeling of love, until he is suddenly attacked by a mysterious figure. It is the Samus clone, whose presence triggers the PTSD Roy has had ever since he battled The Exterminator, and he tries to kiss Samus, only to be brutally attacked and crippled. Puzzled at her reaction, she states that she does not remember him or any of the others present. The Samus spirit and clone temporarily share a moment of confusion, with the former demanding to know why he is being attacked.

While escorting the scientists off of the second Bottle Ship they find that another group of ringleaders have created bioweapon breeding facilities out of the surviving stations, as with their predecessor, and that Madeline Bergman and Eugene Joyce are innocent and being held on the third Bottle Ship by the ringleaders. The Samus clone and spirit suddenly have three objectives: rescue the prisoners, retrieve the Murder Cannon, which was stolen by the ringleaders from Roy and destroy the facilities.

Both Samii and Roy, who insisted that he accompany them, invade the other Bottle Ship and find environments that are much more real than the other Bottle Ship and more reminiscent of Zebes; the Biosphere, Hydrosphere and Pyrosphere. The trek is made more difficult by the Samus clone’s arrogant attitude, the true Samus’ weak strength and movement and Roy’s limerence to the two. The Baby clone also seems to end up on the third Bottle Ship whenever Samus’ DNA evolves. Over time, she begins to gain several Metroid abilities, such as leeching energy, levitating at certain points, the lightning attack of the Gamma Metroid, firing bolts of shrapnel like the Zeta, Omega and Queen Metroids and even using her long hair to lunge at enemies similar to the latter Metroid’s neck, along with further and further increasing strength and violence.

Though initially hostile to Roy, the clone begins to warm up to him, and finally the two make love with one another. While exploring the third Bottle Ship, they find a mysterious blonde woman in a white lab coat to be stalking them. The true Samus believes that it is MB. Her deactivated body was rebuilt with only the purpose of controlling special forces. She retains her emotion to the Metroids yet there are none onboard except for both Samii and the Baby. She intends to capture them and stay with them forever, and indeed takes them to the Metroid Hive, a mixture of SR388 and Tourian.

Roy, not wanting to lose either of them again, dives into the hive, eradicating all the Metroids gleaned from both Samii. The spirit begins to become especially weak due to spirit bodies being incredibly sensitive, and her hair starts to turn brown lock by lock, indicating that she is dying. Angered, the Samus clone fights MB hand to hand, but is surprised when she sinks into the floor and a Mother Brain clone rises up. Using her telepathy, Mother Brain alters the thoughts of the baby, and makes it grow into a bipedal Queen Metroid that is much thinner but still strong. It now believes Samus to not be its mother, and knowing that she killed its real mother, starts off on an angry rampage. With the Baby in hot pursuit both Samii and Roy struggle to escape the Metroid Hive, with the spirit growing weaker and weaker. The Samii and Roy manage to set the third Bottle Ship on a collision course with the other, and picking up Madeline Bergman, Eugene Joyce and the Murder Cannon, they destroy the Baby with some remorse from the Samus clone and escape the third Bottle Ship, returning to the second fast.

Regrouping with the Brigadiers, Kim tries to stall the death of the spirit, but is at the verge of failing. Before the ships collide, the Samus clone calculates a solution: to let the already heavily weakened spirit merge with her own body, healing it and fully resurrecting Samus as if she never died. However, the Bottle Ships are too close for comfort, forcing them to escape quickly while a huge explosion ensues and all specimens are destroyed, along with any ringleaders caught in the destruction.

As the spirit’s last lock of hair turns brown, Kim realizes it is too late. The spirit finally begins to fade, until the clone falls down on top of it. Because the spirit and the clone match, the spirit’s consciousness and memories are transferred into the clone, bringing Samus back from the dead. Her abilities are also naturally restored to her, including her Zero Suit and even her original Varia Suit, with the DNA of the Baby still within her. Samus requests the final thing that she needs, her helmet, still in Roy’s possession, and activates it, before she decides to “make it all up to him.”

Using powers from both Ron and Kim, the power of love transports the group back in time to Z-SF761, in the climax of Avenger 1, with the final battle against The Exterminator being relived all over again. Samus and Roy release an infant Metroid that they preserved from the hive and kill it, using its energy to destroy The Exterminator while still preserving Samus’ life. The group then escapes from Z-SF761 again, with no sorrow to live for.

At least 8 months later, it is revealed that during the exploits on the third Bottle Ship, a child had been conceived, and Samus, already well into her pregnancy, decides with Roy to name their daughter Diana, after the Roman goddess of the hunt. This is continued on in Metroid Avenger 3: (insert title name), in which their daughter evolves similarly to a Metroid as she inherited her mother's DNA, and is kidnapped by a criminal that Samus had apprehended in her early days; Ferris Wren. While trying to kill him she, Roy, Ron and Kim end the corruption in the Federation. --RoyboyX 21:42, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Damn. Well, few tweaks here and there, add some filler, and I say YES! By the way, I've been forging music for the series over the time I've been gone. I'm currently working on The Exterminator's theme. I just have to write it, record it, and post it. 03:25, February 12, 2011 (UTC) -- TerrorDactyl.

Tweaks like what? Avenger 3's setting is the reconstructed Zebes, or at least the beginning. It's where they go to train Diana. --RoyboyX 03:31, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Avenger 3 plotEdit

Okay this still needs a name but I have the basics of it all.

Samus, Roy, etc. have all gone to the rebuilt Zebes to hide, live and give birth to Diana. She evolves quickly, very similar to a Metroid, because the breeding program allowed them to evolve fast, and she grows to a girl the age of 15. Diana is beautiful, she inherits her mother's blonde tresses and eyes, and her father's rebelliousness.

While Samus and Roy explore Zebes in search of more natural supplies, they run into a curious homeless man in Brinstar with black hair and a green blanket wrapped around him. He asks for some seguru; instead they treat him to a nice glass of whiskey. They then bring him back to Zebes to help him start his life again. However, when they hear screaming, he comes out bald, wearing a green armorsuit not unlike Weavel's and holding Diana in a neck-breaker (although her neck isn't broken). He is actually Ferris Wren, a criminal Samus apprehended in her early days. He then makes off with her, fleeing to a facility he had been secretly building on Zebes during the three years between Avenger 1 and 2.

Samus and Roy grab their weapons and enter the facility to rescue their daughter. Wren subjects Diana to all sorts of torture, and uses DNA of Metroid, Space Pirate and an unknown alien species thought to be extinct to create a new generation of Pirates called Hunters. Using several specimens stolen from the Bottle Ships he creates a new maze for Samus and Roy to explore.

While rampaging through the facility-with-no-name, Samus and Roy are taunted by Wren using a Mad AI (the scrapped final boss of a rejected game concept, Metroid 1.5, that later become MP2) that taunts them at every turn in several different forms. Sroy (the name we will use as short for Samus and Roy) create an android double of Samus' armor as well to assist them (who they call Mecha Samus), use several captured robots to cause more destruction and shut down life-support to the Pirates. Wren then appears before them with an army of Luminoth. However, the funny thing about these Luminoth are that they are Dark Luminoth. Although they were all eradicated during the war on Aether, Wren captured several living Luminoth after the species repopulated, and using several surviving Darklings, created Dark Luminoth against their will. Samus recognizes one of them to be U-Mos. The Luminoth face Sroy, with U-Mos' true form pleading to Samus that she kill them. She does so regretfully.

Samus, Roy and Mecha Samus enter the Reactor Core and find Diana trapped behind a wall of Grobnite, which Samus refuses to Power Bomb because it would kill Di. The Mad AI then taunts Samus, causing her anger to get the better of her and she faces it in a final boss battle. Although she destroyed the AI, she does not know where Wren is. Roy then lurches in pain; Wren has stabbed him from behind the shadows. While Samus tries to leech energy into Roy to keep him alive, Mecha Samus battles Wren. However, he manages to weaken her to the point where she is barely able to move on her own free will. Mecha Samus manages to set off an explosive on Diana's cage, and she tumbles into a hydraulic press, which Wren crushes her in.

Wren then grabs Samus and stabs her as well. Samus and Roy attempt to get over to each other, and Samus leeches the last bit of energy she has in her to give to Roy, but she dies in his arms. Roy, unwilling to live without her, stabs himself again and dies as well. Shortly thereafter, Di's cage explodes, knocking Wren down and hopefully killing him. Although hurt from the explosion, she excessively forces herself to crawl towards her deceased parents, unable to maintain her composure. Wren then gets up and chases Di. She then sets off the reactor core to explode, and then struggles to escape while using several organisms she finds along the way to leech energy from for sustenance. After barely making it out, she reflects on the deaths of her parents and decides to follow in her mother's footsteps. --RoyboyX 21:20, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

== Re:Favor == Done and done. But you do realize, it will be your responsibility to take care of the page? Nah, just kidding. If you have the free time, you can link all of the games back to wikitroid, but if you don't, I'll take care of it. Glad I could help! Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough 21:05, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Um... been looking at the Metroid Retrospective page. Not really fanon, per say. Can you not run a vote to have it on Wikitroid? Because I'm afraid we can't really have it here. Maybe you could make it as a sub-page of your user page, but I don't really know. If you run a vote on Wikitroid, I'll vote for it to stay. Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} 23:43, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

It was unofficial media and as such qualifies as belonging to a fanon wiki. --RoyboyX 23:53, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

It was unofficial media and as such qualifies to be booted off of a canon wiki. It does not, however, have any relevance to fanon what so ever. Take Planet Zebeth for instance, it could be classified under unofficial media, but it is actually fan fiction. The videos talk about the Metroid series as a whole in a canonical sense, and therefore, while being unofficial media, are not fanon. Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} 23:57, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, feel free to delete it. --RoyboyX 00:32, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't feel right doing that. I would delete it if I was so inclined, but I am giving you a chance to save your article. Would you like to do so? Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough 00:42, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, I personally have no attachment to it. Fell free to roast it like the Sarah Connor snapshot. --RoyboyX 00:47, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey. Just asking you a favor from me. I won't be here on the twenty second to close the featured articles vote, can you do it? Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} 14:11, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

If I can remember... --RoyboyX 21:19, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind about that. I got back from my meeting early enough too. Looks like you forgot anyway... Nexus11: Because pure dominance isn't enough {ADMIN} 02:07, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

==Why?== Why are there no admins here? What happened to the FastLizard4 and the Hero of Wisdom and the Moblin slayer and the Nexus11 and the Piratehunter? You have alot of edits and should know. What happened to them? Solemnity 23:44, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, man. I'm kind of new to all this fanficky stuff, and I was wondering: is it okay to do crossover stories? Because, since Metroid is my favorite game series, and Doctor Who is my favorite TV show, I was considering writing a fanfic set after Metroid Fusion, in which the Daleks (the Doctor's greatest enemies, in case you know nothing) hire Samus to capture the Doctor. I just finished writing out the first part, and so far it's pretty good... kind of tongue-in-cheek at times, but still good. Anyway: doable, or not?

Um... sure. --RoyboyX 14:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Metroid Wiki Manual of StyleEdit

I'm new to this wiki and not sure where to go with this question so I'll just post it here for now; if you can't help me with it, then you can point me in the direct of an admin instead.  Anyways, I was reading the Metroid Wiki Manual of Style and I think it needs a revision, personally.  I'm on the Bleach Fanfiction Wiki a lot and I would like to edit this wiki's Manual of Style based on the Bleach Fanfiction Wiki's Manual of Style, which I think is extremely well done.  Obviously it would have to be altered a bit, because that is Bleach and this is Metroid, but I think it would be reall cool.  Again, if you can't give me permission to do this, then you can direct me toward an admin. PITZWIL100 (talk) 10:09, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Metroid Avenger Changes Edit

So I've gone ahead and made some changes/additions to Metroid Avenger to make it more coherent and believable. I've also taken the liberty of throwing in a character of my own - as no one really seems to be using this wiki I hope that it was okay of me to do so.

I want to keep the spirit of the story the same, and have kept large portions of original text to that end. I was wondering if you maybe cared to take a look at the additions I've made so far and offer feedback, as you seem to be the only remotely active user (judging from Wikitroid - no one is active here) who participated in creating this story originally. TheLichLordDaleJones (talk) 06:22, December 12, 2015 (UTC)


Hi, I have been doing a Metroid fanfic on my own in a form of a crossover. Are crossovers allowed here too? Just sayin. {{SUBST:User:Pat141elite/PatSig|03:57,1/25/2016}} 03:57, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Yes. RoyboyX 08:35, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, friend. {{SUBST:User:Pat141elite/PatSig|01:43,1/26/2016}} 01:43, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

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